It's my first time giving a critique on a journal feature. I decided to do it because you have asked a question in which I'm also interested, how many photos per feature can someone look at?
First of all, I didn't think they were so many photos, I had the impression that they were fewer.
I think it usually depends on the theme of the feature, it may be a feature with three pieces that depict three strong themes or a feature with many pieces that depict one general theme.
However, a lot of pieces will load a little slower than of a normal journal feature, depending on the internet connection of each one of us.
In my opinion, as long as you make the viewers understand the idea of the feature and captivate them, it's good. And you've managed to do that really well, so, congratulations!
Thank you for taking the time to write a critique!
I also thought there weren't many photos, so that's why I asked! I also thought of time problem with internet connections, which is why I didn't put too many in in the first place. In my first feature like this I had a lot more, and I had one or two people telling me it loaded very slowly for them
I think next time I will include a lot more, and maybe vary it from time to time
Your second point is really interesting, I'd never though of that before!