The voices in my head

Ive never written a critique before, but I'm going out on a whim here to see if I can make something fair. I'll split my comments into positive and negative.

POSITIVE:
-even though its symmetrical, the composition combined with the imagery seems to allow it.
-the color combination is a good one to have as well; the cool pallet adds to the 'spooky' or 'eerie' feeling you get when you think about someone losing control and succumbing to the voices within.

NEGATIVE:
-Im not too sure how I feel about the quality of the image.. Its a bit grainy in the face- not blurry, but grainy.
-The pieces that are to be in focus (hair hands) seem to be a little over exposed with light. I get where you were going with this, but I think its a little too intense. I would suggest some color correcting in photohsop. They seem to almost be lost in the highlights..
-The way the light hits the strands of hair are distracting. I find myself thinking more about how much she needs a trim over the fact that this piece is conveying a message.

In the ends, I do like this piece- its totally gorgeous! I just feel like it needs to be polished up a bit first.